it was a way to kill 3 minutes, but you need to put more events in it and describe everything a little more. For example, you said somehting about a legendary wolf named Amy- why was she so legendary?

nice

that game was fun good job

RayJ, I could read it and follow it. And I knew what was going on.

better grammar but good anyways

Try to use better grammer next time. Great gamebook though!

Can I offer some constructive critique? I think you might want to try
practicing and studying a bit more grammar and spelling so it's easier
to understand your story. You might want to add more actions, or more
information to the actions you have. The overall story was too hard to
follow with the start, and I really had no idea what was going
on...

My two cents.