It is pretty short and kinda dull, but it`s your first gamebook and you have the time to improve, and I also ask the same question Foxy Aleu asked. Where are pages eight and nine? It could use something interesting, but nice job anyway.

It's kinda short, and also could use a little more exsitment, like
maybe something dangerous. But it's good for your first time!

i think you should make some more interesting choices whick make
people think about their pick eg kill this starving wolf or help him
(you would think about it and if you were nice you would let him live)
rather than just hope-i-get-lucky 1, 2, or 3.

It's kinda short...but still good! Nice job!

nice, but kinda short, keep workin at it!^^

well, its your first one. it doesn't have to be long. it
certainly was good for a first try!

Togo is right.A little short.

No offence, but the gamebook is a little too short, the plot
isn't developed very well and you don't give much choice to
the player. Seems like this is your first gamebook, so you
have time to improve.

Nice job,but where were pages eight,and nine?