Good game books! I enjoyed doing them!

Just a few things I noticed.

In the Balto 1 & 2 trivia questions, what do you mean by he didn’t really save all the children?

And, real Balto wasn’t a reddish-brown color, he was black. But when he moved to Cleveland Ohio, after the serum run, he turned reddish-brown, which is why his mount is reddish-brown.

But otherwise, they were great!

oh, sorry i will fix that.

The answer for Boris's species is incorrect. Your answer says he's an Alaskan snow goose, when he's actually a Russian snow goose. I don't believe an Alaskan snow goose even exists.

I don't know if Muru was intended to be a male or female, but all of the animals that appeared to Aleu and Balto was Aniu in disguise.

By the way, in your first question, I would suggest that you remove (or even re-word it, as it would be a sentence fragment without a verb) the word "racing." Racing makes it sound like who is Steele racing against.

This sentence would make sense: In the opening scene of Balto, who is the black and white dog we see racing against the other team?

It does. To enable it, click on the "ABC" button and select "Enable SCAYT". But as for the normal comment boxes, your browser will underline misspelled words with a red line. Right-click on the underlined words to get a list of spelling suggestions.

I don't know what to make of your story, Jo, but what I do know is you're bashing everyone around you. I don't know what your family life is like, but if there truly are problems, then perhaps ask your teacher for help with your writing. There are also many sites and videos that you can check out.

Like I said before, I don't expect an eleven year-old to have perfect grammar, but you should know know how to capitalize names of places, names of people, etc. As for spelling, every browser has spell-check, and even the text editor of the site has a spell-check function.

There's no need to get defensive when someone tries to help you, Jo. As long as no one is breaking the rules, anything you post online is open to constructive criticism and opinions. Not everything is going to be a walk in the park.

I think you ought to have someone help you with your grammar and spelling. To make a fanfic or gamebook enjoyable, your readers need to be able to understand what they're reading.

hope you like my first ever game book, Balto's Quest. it's based off the movie so, if uve seen the first balto and have payed really good attencion to it you might just beat it! don't be upset if you dont get it first trie ( i haven't even beaten it myself and i made the game )