i loved the ending. it made me cry.

this ending made me cry too!!! please right more

Thanks Steele. BUt on thing, if you are gonna call me
somthing like " dudette ", don't. Just call me dude. Glad
you liked it.

I loved this story. But dudette. You seriously gotta hurry
up and make the second part becuz I am going to blow up if
you dont

Dragon Tamer - I kinda didn't know how my story would work,
if I didn't have that. So I left if like that. Although I'm
not fons of that idea either.
~Tala~

Nice story plot, although I've always been leery of anyone
looking into the future through mystical means. Still, the
plot has potential.

Steele - Forgot. He is (c) of me.

Thank you.

hey tala, there is only one thing that you forgot,, you know
how you put
Tala(c)of me
Dono(c)of me

well who is Killick (c) of? I don't think he is
universals

Dragon Tamer - I was at my friend's when typing that. And I
did not realize that I had not logged off of hers

Dragon Tamer - Maybe I should. If you see it is gone. I'm
fixxing it up, aand stuff... I am going to PM you telling
when it is on and changed.

You know what might help? Try getting inside her head a
little more. Anytime a character is by him or herself, say
if they've run off or something, is a good time to have them
do some real soul-searching. Like what they did with Aleu in
Balto 2. Plus, it's a good time to throw in a mystery
character, like Muru, who helps them vent or turns them in
the direction they should go. Hope this idea comes in handy. It sure has for me!

Dragon Tamer - Yeah. She does need to let go of the past.
But all her life, she has wanted the answere to that
question. Maybe I should have pointed that out somehow.

That was your BEST story ever!!! I LOVED it!!!!! That was
such a nice story!!!!!

Your Buddy:
~steele_rox~

Nice story. I guess Tala still has to learn a little about
letting go of the past, huh?

Thank you.

Thanks Cat!

Thak you.

good job

no prob tala

Thank's Steele ol' pal!

that was WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!

Hey buddy! That was a very good story! will there be any
more? Let me know!!!! I liked it

steele - No I deleted it.

I have been thinking hard on it, and I haven't quite decided
yet.

that was a good story i liked how you put it into
sections...........also, ,will there be a sequel so we can
see what happens next?

What do you mean by perverous behavour? I know what
perverous means, but I don;t understand the way you used it.

I'm gonna give it to you straight: this is demented in every
single way. Steele and Kodi were the only characters (aside
from your own, that is) who were the least bit in character,
not to mention all the perverse behavior, etc. I like to say
good things, but this time there's nothing good to say, and
I think it would be morally wrong to remain silent in this
case.

Thanks!

Before and after---> I see
Poem---> that was
wonderful. I loved it! It is so good whenever I try to write
poems, they never work out. Also i can totally tell that
balto is talking about jenna and that they are "The Perfect
Match" faves