Thanks. And what do you think about Dan and Luna's romance?

That was the best one so far.. this just keeps getting
better and better! fantastic work so far and this was the
most suspenseful ending of any chapter so far.

I can wait. but not for long! this one's gonna be one
hell of a ride to the very end..

That's cool with me.. I am sure the final piece will be
worth the wait.. bring it on!

Thanks for
clairifing the reason for why you are doing it this way!

untill we meet again. I bit you adieu!

Thanks, Icewind. And Maya, i'm putting all in some short
chapters to keep the drama and to call the users' attention
for more time. Be patient, it will worth it.

that aside.. nice work on the new chapter. no big surprise as I thought Aniu probably had something to do with all of this so far..

Ver good and well thought out matierial in that one. I can totally
understand some of the other's confusion in the last few
chapters.. keep up the great work!

PS: this is
one of the BEST new fics I have read recently. so I'm very
impressed with your debut on here and look foward to the
next new story following the already slighly epic and
incredible one your currently writing.

I think the same thing really. this isn't an attack. just a
good suggestion to make your writings easier to read and
download.. EX: instead of opening ten different files or
however many there may be, you can open just one and have
things be a lot easier to operate and enjoy the excellent in
those files as one instead...

I think it would just be better if you simply posted the
whole story all together - or post multipul chapters
together (like 3-6 and then 7-9) to make them longer. ;]

Thanks Icewind, I'm gonna read your fanfics too. And I'm
writhing chapter 3 right now

Still getting even better.. this part was simple yet it
still got the point of what was going on across really
smoothly. keep it up. this has the potential to be an
awesome fic when it is finished.. you have a HUGE fan here
so far!

I'll be looking out for the next part
intently!

So long untill then!

Nice work so far.. this one's really interesting so far!

on to the next part!

thanks, this saturday i'll be with my father in the hospital
he works in. its in another city, so monday i'll be back,
cya!

Nice place to pause! I've got to see more of this.

Guys, I edited Chapter 9, you may want to give a look on it,
I changed a story told by Aniu, and it'll be important.

i have not read all your stories yet but what i have read is
really good and i am enjoying myself reading them

Hey guys! I'm back! And chapter 6 is DONE! Enjoy!

Wow! The emotions were so intense in this chapter! you were
certainly right about this one part being fantastic.. I'd
say you were right on the money!

I can gladly
say this was most definitely the best part of them all so
far and I bet if there's another part it will be just as
good. if not even better than this one was!

KEEP THE GREAT WORK FLOWING! THIS ONE IS AWESOME SO FAR!

Guys, I'll take a break of writing and drawing, my vacations
are coming, and it'll be better for you to read all the
other chapters I already made. Cya, I'll miss ya guys! ^^

Very nice, although one or two pieces of dialogue could use
some work.

sorry, DT, i am updating my previous chapters this days to
prevent more mistakes, you might wanna wait until im
finished.

I haven't read them yet. They all sound really interesting.
I will put you in my favs so I can read them. They sound
pretty good.

Wow.. what an interesting turn of events this is!

just you keep bringing the widening suspense and I will
get you goooood! XD

No seriously just kidding
and yet another awesome fic you have going so far with this
one!

BRING ON THE NEXT ONE!

I can sense some Avatar in this. Anyway, great job!

OK.

Thanks, Juuchan. Guys, I managed to surpass the editor problem, and
the final edited chapter is coming soon.

Just for the record, I still have the orignal version of this fic and
I thought that version was great too and I think the current version
was just a vast improvment to a already excellent piece of writing..