Has Jenna fallen for Steele?!
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Balto's gone for a whole week and Jenna is left at home all alone without any bundles to take care of. And thats when Steele decides to start messing around Jenna's house.
When Balto returns what will he find? Is Jenna as faithful as everyone thinks?
Rewritten, new plot change.
Introduction
First off I would like to start this presentation by saying. Yes, I did delete all of my past fanfics. Thats for anyone who hasn't checked back since my last fanfic was put out.
This is still Sandstorm, to clear up the confusion I simply changed my username to something I prefer over the previous one. My new one is Kittylover, which you may or may not have figured out yet depending on if your blind or not >.<
I like to go by 'Kitty' for short, thats the reason I changed it. As well as the fact that Kittylover is a more common username that I go by online as well as the fact that I simply got sick of using the name of my favorite WarriorCats character.
As I have promised in previous Presentation rewrites, I WILL be rewriting all of my past fan stories. Though most will hardly resemble the past ones, especially 'Is Jenna falling for Steele?!' which has a completely different outcome and plot. Hopefully one that is a bit more liked by the people who actually DO read my fanfics. Who I all appreciate deeply for their favs and comments, I like to know that some people enjoy my work!
The Aleu and Teak fanfics I am deeply pondering whether or not I will rewrite them, and if I ever do most likely some things may be changed.
I also have NEW fanfics on the way, as if you can't call my rewrites entirely new fanfics in a way. =3
All of them will be CLEAN. Just a little heads-up.
Some new fanfics will include, my version of Saba. As well as a whole new set of characters not yet mentioned. And of course all the other unnamed pups of Balto and Jenna's litter, their stories and my names for them of course.
Expect a few Presentation rewrites, I change my mind frequently.
Upcoming Fanfics
Mostly all of my rewrites, which will of course share all the past names that they had originally. Thats so they can be recognized. I will NOT rewrite my 'Alien of Nome' fics. Those fics were simply the cause of my love of Sci-Fi shows, which runs a muck within some of my stories. It may occur in the near future, but I sure hope it wont. I tend to regret it later, since they don't turn out as well as I may hope...
Lady and the...wolf?: Coming Fic of my newest character Lady and her tale of love with Balto's unknown half-brother. This also features my past charrie Star who in the past fell in love with Kodi and bore his pup Ruby, who was close friends with Saphire.
Star is sad and needy for love and Lady is head-over-heels for her very first love. But will this new wolf in town break up the close bond between two sisters Star and Lady?
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Comments
Razor
of phiosophical debate, what does writing it make YOU?
er
sucks.
er
you guys will have another fic to read. Hope all like it.
er
ola
or at least the 5 last ones
Wolf Of
The Mist
dramatic and actiony
er
075-cwp
er
have writters block! I can't think!!
er
Razor
was a little boring.once again,i couldnt finish your
book.sorry.thanks anyway.
er
can promise it has Steele's secret son in it!, If he is a
good or bad char. you will have to find out!... Or if you
can nag me enough to tell you, But that ruins the surprise,
now don't it?
It's was a good story maybe little too quick in the
beginning but Can't wait for the continue:D
er
was edited, it was not easy so no bad comments on the new
ending to my fic!
er
withnoout it deleting the parts after it...
er
If something smells or looks disgusting I wont eat it.
Razor
concept is an old one. *shrug* I'm trying to work on it, but
I'm also trying to work my way up to professional-grade
writing, and sometimes I lose touch with different styles.
er
075-cwp
idea about Jenna leaving Balto for Steele, I kind of agree
that wasn’t so great a story line. And it got kind of boring
to write… Well hope you like this one." Your in my favs now
for sure !
of your fics!
Razor
could stand some improvement here and there. For one thing, was it
really neccessary to have Steele go as far as he did wreaking
his vengeance on Saphire? I'm pretty sure that part would
qualify the story for deletion, so you might want to
re-write around it. Also, Balto seemed a bit out of
character, what with the stuff Steele said about what he
(Balto) used to be like (although I'd take anything Steele
said with a grain of salt, as they say). I suggest you make
a few adjustments, and then you might have an OK ending to
what started off, in all honesty, pretty darn lousy. BTW, my
brother says great avatar, and I agree.
er
wanted to try to write a story with Steele and Jenna, see
how people like it ^^ and I'm really glad you like my
stories! I'm happy to have encouragment, Writting and
drawing are my passion so I'm glad people like my work... If
my dad would let me use scanner I would put some of my
drawings as covers but at the moment he isn't.. , Well
hope you enjoy my next stories too!
well maybe I should
tell what did want to say(or ask) in the last comment: You
big Steele fan, aren't you? way i ask this is that you made
Jenna to leave balto and mate Steele
hate Steele Jenna love And one more thing.... ehh forget
that I take it when I have read all your stories
now I just most read the continue
er
good at it considering my age , and I have full comitment to
improving. Sure I don't know every thing about writting I'm
not even in midle school yet!... Well I will be next year
but, thats not the point I'm very talented and learn fast.
And if you don't like my work than why do you keep reading
them? Why read something you don't like? Isn't that just
torturing yourself? And if you don't have something nice to
say than keep it to your self instead of making the author
feel bad!
Khan- thank you for pointing out my
mistakes, your very nice ^^
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