no problem!

You make me feel good, rockyjet. Aljan, too!

don't worry. most people here like your art, stories and if u post anything else on (pleese!) we'll end up liking that 2.

I didn't take away your art or your dignity You're just mad because you're encountering a challenge. Instead of just TRYING to make me feel bad (i guarantee that I'm not feeling bad at all) why don't you rise up to the challenge, write a decent, original piece and go over it until you think it's flawless. Decent meaning, take your time writing something instead of rushing to get it done. Original meaning, don't take others' ideas or ideas from movies. I'm not being mean, I'm just giving you some tips so that you can feel the urge to write better and learn to accept criticism and to accept that your work isn't "better" or "worse" than anyone elses.

When I said art, I meant the power of my fanfics.

Yes, but Cat took away my art...my dignity.

eh..... very weird. i didn't know BAMBI had anything to do with balto. it just makes it sound... er... weird. try reading Balto123's fics, aljan and Catwhohas14tails fictions too. there great! plus, who cares what place they are in, all that matters is that your stories are being read!

I've never read it

I don't really like cat's version: Mother and Father.

calm dow, olivia. my art, stories, etc (which you'll most likly see soon) will never win anything. be thankful that you made it. i think your stories are really good; be proud of yourself

I can't wait to read your new up coming fan fic, Oliviva. I look forward to it.

What!? I'm in 8th place!? I used to be in 5th! Ok, Now I can TRULY say I like my version WAY better!

Here is some wisdom: All writing is good enough to be published, no matter the content, no matter the theme, and no matter the story. For it depends on the point of view. I might say a writing of mine is not worthy of becoming a book while a reader might say, "Wow! Have this published!" Everything that is done in the world depends on the point of view of the one who does the viewing. Remember my words, Olivia. May the stars look over you. I take my leave.

The summary is wrong, you say? Hmm... If you are on the forums, you could pm me the correct summary, and I could then change it. Otherwise, I suppose you could post it here.
Again, I apologize if my earlier critique was too harsh.

The summary is WRONG!

So cool! I love it. Keep it up.

Olivia, just a quick note: Please try to send your fanfics by attachments, and a summary in the email.

Great job on this fic, though. A little critisism: You're really [i]telling[/i] everyone what happened, try to use more description, and avoid in-story commentary like 'Anyway, here's the good part.'
I apologize profusely if this is too harsh.