Chapter Two is editted now too. Enjoy.

Guys, I'm making a general edition on my fanfics from The
Wolf Inside. I'll make the chapters longer by putting two in
one, and i'll correct the large quantity of mistakes i've
made, ok? I'm finished with the first chapter, so you might
want to give it a look, its much better.

Ok, guys, I'm in vacations, I've been aproved in school, and
I couldn't help it but writing the other chapter! For those
that have finished the first book, the second one's third
chapter is coming. Great to be back!

We'll miss you too.

Cool.

Congrats! I've got 2 weeks until my b'day. I'll be 13.

Guys! Next wednesday it's my birthday! I'll be 14!

Yeah, DT. I took much inspiration from there. But theres
still a lot to see. Youll notice much more inspiration
sources, but still, i have my originality.

Nice twist. You haven't seen "Brother Bear" by any chance,
have you?

Aleu --> You're welcome.

Thanks for reading my PM, Dragon Tamer.

Your welcome, again.

that'd be great, aleu. thanks. ^^

I can spread the word, halfbloodwolf, if you'd like.

No seriously it's my pleasure!

I will try to
promote these when I can. thanks for the good word on my
artwork as well.. I reallt appreciate that a ton!

BTW. check out this song by James LaBrie out from his
record elements of persuasion.. I am obsessed with it right
now and I thought it could be a great source of inspiration
right now!

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13. Understand
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Lyrics By
James LaBrie
Music by Jame LaBrie's Mullmuzzler with
Marco Sfogli
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Give me all the now that I can borrow
Let me
have this moment for a while
This storm will be here
at this time tomorrow
And I'll have just a memory of
her smile

And ill be left to wonder
Could
I've done more?
Fighting the stress and under
Waiting for control

Let it out
Let it
out
Let it out

I accept the circumstance
of truth now
Too petty I'm facing it alone
I've
got to summon strength within me somehow
As I head
into a future thats unknown

And ill be left to
wonder
Could I've done more?
Fighting the stress
and under
Waiting for control

Let it
out
Let it out
Let it out

More down
then I'm up untied
It makes no sense The mess that I'm
in
But I can't give up till the both of you
Are
here in my life again



Let it
out
Let it out
Let it out
Let it out
Let it out


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Thanks, Icewind. Dont worry, i'm already thinking about
another book. Its great to have a devoted fan like you! And, would you be so kind to spread your opinion about my fanfics? Few are reading it, and it would be great to have more fans like you.

After reading this whole thing over again with the newer
parts I realized this was the best fanfic I've seen since
RTW put out his "Darkness" fic almost 3 years ago and I will
gladly say this ones made my all-time top 5 favorites at 3rd
in that list behind RTW's Darkness and Ragingwolf's NYPD
saga! nice work and you IMO deserve to be in that elite
group of writers!

Now on to the next book in
the saga! I will have a eye on this section for it whenever
it comes out! good luck on that as well and I will see you
around the site and can't wait for more..

THE
BOTTOM LINE IS: YOU ARE AN INSANELY COOL WRITER!

You're welcome.

Wow! Thanks! I even got to blush! Kidding, XD.

You've got talent, halfbloodwolf39. You could go somewhere
in life.

woooow! You are just insane on your way with words!

ANNNNNNNNND that was a hell of a huge cliffhanger!
bring on the next part and I will be on lookout for it!

Those last two were excellent as well..

Sorry
I haven't been able to comment to the last few as quickly as
I usually would. been having some major connection issues at
home as of late and I'm on my work's connection right now

I will however mention that I have these saved to
my home comp via flash drive and I have read through all of
the last three chapters you posted in the last few weeks
(9,10,11) and look forward as always to the next batch or
whatever you want to call it.

Yes i did read this one actually..

Tough story
to really break down here.. sure it was great as always but
I didn't see what exactly provoked the attack at the end
there..

I guess if there's another chapter
we'll find out unless you have another fic with that planned
in it!

But other than that it was excellent
work as always!

Keep em' coming and I'll see
you around the site!

So obviously this transportation system wasn't completely
fault free as I we all know from this chapter huh?.

So exactly how will this problem be solved?

The main question is also will it be solved quick
enough to prevent more problems or no? if not we could have
a HUGE issue brewing here..

So I guess we'll
find out in the next part? no? maybe so! XD I don't know!

Things are happening faster again guys! Chapter 8 is on too!
Enjoy it, it's great!

Hey guys! Things are running faster here, because CHAPTER
SEVEN IS ALREADY ON! Enjoy, this one's awesome.

This one really clairifys a lot of things about this whole
situation and why it even happened in the first place..

I think the spirtial connection Nava mentioned
reminded me a lot of a personal therianthropy and I have
learned a TON about my own past through reincarnation and
from it came the first one of my personal characters.
Adriondack. but I won't get into detail on heere cause I'll
wind up going on about it forever..

That
aside.. nice job and best part so far!

I'm really starting to think this isn't just a friendship,
but rather a deepening relationship.. some of the material
reminds me of the the first film near the end there and I
thought that was a brilliant touch..

You just
need to keep up this incredible consistency you have going
between chapters and this one's gonna be incredible when
it's put all together..

Thanks Grey Wolf. And everyone, the moment you have expected
has arrived. CHAPTER 5 IS READY! just be patient until the
moderator releases it on the site, i guess you'll like it.

We'll see about that.. personally I think it might be a good
thing but I can't be too sure untill I see more..

For now, so far, so good..

Unless you're
doing what I think you're going to! XD

I shut
up now before I start rambling... END!