Well I read it because it bothered me so much, especially
coming from someone who I regard much as Batman regards
Commissioner Gordon: a valued ally and trusted friend. I
considered removing you from my favorites list altogether,
not to mention booting you off of a certain OTHER list, but
I wanted to get my facts straight.
As for it being one
of your most commented-on fanfics, don't let it get to you.
My fanfics get unbelievable numbers of comments, and there
hasn't been a word of indescretion yet (rest assured, there
never will be). In other words, the number of comments on "Balto: Betrayal," doesn't neccessarily mean that it's popular in a positive sense. I think in your case, so many people
commented on it because, like me, they were shocked by
it. If it bothers you that much, I wonder why you don't
delete it. On the other hand, it's kind of like the story of
David and Bathsheba in the Bible: harsh, but neccessary to
get a point across. I think if you took steps to strengthen
that point, it would go a long way towards improving the
story and aggravating those who root for... certain events.

-> Dragon Tamer: Not to be rude, but I liked the idea of her
as a goddess. You don't have to, and I'm glad you told me
so. It's nice to have constructive criticism. As for her
speech, to my knowlege I only referenced the "I am" speech.
I did not mean to "steal" any lines, but if that is the
case, would you feel better if I cited my source?
->
wolf princess: Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you liked
the fics, esspecially Seven Spanish Angels. (My personal
favorite.)
-> Strawberry Splash: As glad as I am that
you enjoyed my fic, I think you've mis-read or
mis-interpretted it. What I wrote in was that Kale
essentially took advantage of her after luring her into a
false sense of security (talk of past) and then covers it up
under the ruise that she went along willingly (Jenna was
tired, and remembered nothing).

Peace out.
-LWf

Hey, man. I guess people are into that sort of thing. That doesn't mean I have to be. In any
case, I've revised Betrayal a bit if you want to check, and
I'm working on making the necessary changes to the
subsequent fics.
I wish more peopel would read my
latest few fics instead of Betrayal...

OK, I stand corrected about people commenting because it
bothers them. Rats.

Dragon Tamer, cool off! You know that in Balto 2: Wolf Quest
Aniu is depicted as a special wolf, a spirit, an almost
deity.

Just finished reading your stories, great stuff really
enjoyed them all "In The Name of Anui" was nicely done. I
really like your cross-overs too, normally I wouldnt like
those stories but you really excell in writing them. Keep up
the great work

Applegate, Texas is the first (and of course fictional)
setting of my fic, Seven Spanish Angels. Applegate, Alaska
is the birthplace of Jenna, as mentioned in Balto:
Independence Day.

You're welcome!

Nice! Could you do a balto/timesplitters crossover? favs!

what is applegate?

I guess I'll be waiting for your "Believe" fiction then. I'm
not really a person who likes crossovers. o.o

...He looked at his equipment and made sure his pack was tight, He had
to sit and listen to those awful engines roar, He ain't gonna jump no
more!
Nice song, very reassuring I'm sure...
Band of Brothers rocks! Go Winters!

Great stories, I can't wait to read more!

Yes that one just love that song

you are a really good writer, if you can, check out balto's e-mail

Hoo, that was the longest review I think I EVER read! You
got a lot of fans, Lone Wolf!

Yes, I suppose, if only in my dreams. This from the writer
who has 34 favs... Thanks Kelev. Band has taken over my
life in alliance with my school... I need to write. NOW.

I found something a bit weird with two fics: A New Life and
Dark Eyes, Cold Heart. In A New Life, Echo and Vella's pups
were born when Balto and Jenna's weren't. Then in Dark Eyes,
AFTER Wolf Quest, Echo and Vella's litter are still pups.
Am I missing something?

Wow... That's not good. I'll have to see about fixing
that, though it kind of throws off the plots... Man, I can't
belive I didn't see that. Thanks.

The clarinet? Rock on. My band teacher always jokes
about the clarinets. ("Clarinets, you're killing me!") But I
play the trombone, and let me tell you, we rock.
PS: Check my profile for fanfic news.

Which insturment do you play? I play the Clarinet. Rock
on, my friend.

No prob Lone Wolf.

->Loup: Yes, there will be more. School's dragging me down
with final exams and whatnot, but I'm still writing.
Thanks to everyone for all the comments! You guys rock!

Um... Beg pardon, but what do you mean?

Whoa!!!! Independence Day looks awesome!!!!!!!!
Keep
writing!!!
-Starwarsisme

You, Lone Wolf_fanwriter, are a god of fanfiction. I love
every one of your works! You and Rotramel's are just, in
simplicity, stunning, captivating, epic, valorous, tragic,
extraordinary, breathtaking, and awe-inspiring! I love every
single fanfiction you two have ever written! I'm blown away
by your creative and imaginative plotlines, dialogues,
diction, and connotation of each and every story. You are
amazing. Good luck on Independence Day. I am, without a
doubt, going to read that the day it's finished.

Thank you kindly, Balto5670. I've had less and less time on
here because of band, and you have no idea how great it
feels to get on and find a new comment since your last
visit.
I'm glad you enjoy my works so much. I'll be
sure to let you know when my fic is posted on the site and
forums.
Rock on.
-LWf

They are all interesting

Independence day-great plot. Another amazing fanfiction by
Lone Wolf. You know, I really thought Jenna was going to
die, (and really i hoped so) which would have brought the
series to a perfect yet sad ending. Also, the first couple
of fanfictions, I like them alot, but the whole kidnapping
idea seems to be stressed to much. Perhaps, rewrite them?
I'm asking for a lot, but i was just wondering how else the
story could be started. Did you know I was born the day
before the American Independence Day? Not that you would
really want to know that. Eh that was a bit awkward. You
play in band? Oh yeah you said it that one time
when...nevermind. I play the B flat clarinet... Good job on
the poems in the fanfiction. i like it alot.

P.S. this is SilverWolf, if you remember, but i never can
seem to remember my password. Good luck with future
fanfictions!

That...was...AWESOME!!!! Encore, encore!!! I loved it! Lord
Shadow was such a great name for a villain, and the ending
was such a surprise! (It had a Biblical feel to it that I
liked a lot) My gosh, how do you do it? You're one of the
best authors of all time, Lone wolf! Write on and on and
on!!!