Don't worry, rockyjet! I've written the sequel to Saba's
Love (It's a little rushed... ), and I'm writing a fake
fanfiction of Balto's Puppyhood...it'll be rated PG-13 for
mild language and violence...

I love your fan fics. please write more! ^^

Thanks, rockyjet!

Person, Balto and his New Friend doesn't exist yet.

I have 4 favorites? *bursts into song* I'm feeling good, and there's nothing you can do about it!

Cat14 meant my story "Created Misery." She just used my other story by mistake. But thanks for the comment. I hope I'm improving as much as you.....

I'm working on a Saba fan fic. It'll be my most efforted fanfic, and it explains who the "Unknown dog" is.

whoo, splee! (i love that word and say it all the time in my house) Splee..... ok. Post more on the forums, please! ^-^

Splee!

Thank you!

Ok, I can't wait to read the improved one!

I'm kinda tired of looking at my own posts.

I changed it, though. I decided not to kill his Dad, so now now Aniu got shot and the cave didn't collapse.

the one about Nero; you seem to be taking your time on this one, it's my favorite of your stories so far

yeah; your stories on the forums are good, but they're kinda rushed too..

Anybody else have comments?

Cat is COMPLETELY right. I left a similar comment in "the devestating loss" on the forums. be sure to see that. Your stories are good, but need some more time if they could be better

Some tips for making your stories longer is 1) Take your time. If you rush your stories they will never turn out good. So take the time to plan what's going to happen in your story, then take more time to write it and more time to look it over. 2) Use plenty of detail. Describe characters using personification, imagery, etc 3) Use some foreshadowing. If an important scene is going to happen in your story, hint about it earlier in the story. 4) Make sure your plot (which also includes your characters) is believable. If you hurry through it with a random plot you came up with with no detail or anything, it won't keep anyone reading it. And here's a tip if you want to make your stories more believable: use real-life situations in your life or in someone you know's life. I hope those help you more in the future

I'll read your new 1 right away!

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT! A new fanfic of mine has been posted in the forums! It's called The Devastating Loss.

Thank you. As you can see, I decided not to kill Kitok. So, Aniu is the one who got shot now.

It has been published in the forums! Remember, it's called Enemies in Love! Enjoy it!

Ooops, here not her!

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!!!! My fanfictions will now be posted on the forums since it won'tlet me her. My next fanfiction is: Enemies in Love. It's about when Balto's son, Yukon, has pups with Quartz, Steele's sister! Nice conflict, dontcha think?

olivia, don't get THAT serious about it; your stories are very good as well. just because your stories are not on the list does not mean people don't like them. just keep writing what you enjoy writing about and you'll feel good.

Alright, now I'm mad because Mother and Father is in 1st place!

(i have proof for both stories and art that they aren't good enough)

here's more advice; just because your stuff isn't in the "most popular" section doesn't mean it's not good. enjoy what you do and you'll feel great when you're done.

You're right. It made my eye twitch. No offense.

oh and if u want proof that my art isn't good enough to be on the favourites, look 4 my gallery. ur stuff is way better than mine!!