I fixxed my mistakes!

that was okay okay okay but it needs work and you definetly
need to fix up your grammer(no offense) but you had some
spelling errors so just telling you that you may want to try
to fix them but it doesnt matter it is your fic by the way,
awsemon buddy!

hello

Thanks! And your right, but I don;t think they will be any
good.

hey tala! I really enjoyed your story and I know that in the
future, there will be plenty more fun filled ones. Keep up
the good work

Realy? I read it over and over, and saw no problems. I'll
fix em'.

The grammar needs work, but it's an interesting concept to
have them be former friends who drifted apart.

Deleted a lot of my old ones that made absolutely no scense.

Steele - First off. I deleted hat story. And second, It
means that... I'll PM you.

Family Troubles--> Why would Jenna and Steele walk down a
hill? It doesn't make any sense..................

good story

well, It was good. I think it just not was my taste of
readings Bad luck for me

Nvm

nice

Your fanfics don't have the best grammer.

"We All Make Mistakes" sounds almost exactly like "Balto:
Betrayal" by Lone Wolf Fanwriter. Thats why it sounds so
fimilar.

It goes to one subject and then it goes to another that is
kinda odd

Hmm, this sounds oddly familiar

Your fanfics are interesting,thats the first one i read that
had steele in it.

Thanks

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i am not quite sure about the speech marks i your story.....

NICE FAN FIC!!! You are a good writer!!! Keep up the good work!!!