OK i need help:Which fic should i work on?
Ok so i hope you enjoy my fics and please comment about them!
upcoming fics: 2 Good Lives and 1 Bad Life,What would i do without you?,and The Gathering of the Heros
i will start making more when i have more fans!
~thank you, Huske out~
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I agree with Lunawolf, the talking can be a little confusing. It is
still really good, and I'm glad to see Larae in the story! :] Another
thing you could work on is discribing the characters, and the
surrounding. Just a thought. Anyway, really nice story, can't wait to
read the next one. |