hmph...so seriously I can't be very critical considering how well
written these stories are. (take as compliment) So thinking back on
your story, as I read I felt like I was just skimming along. Sure i
took the time to read some passages...here and there.
BUT agreeing with Denali, you're plot is unrecognizable. Plus, if at
possible could you at least add a little action eh? Like make me say,
"did ,so and so, just do that?" DO THAT and you'll get a fav. But
for now I'll be watching you, *creepy stalker music plays* so keep up
on those fics.
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December 23, 2008
It was perfect; punctuation, grammar, everything! But I'd advise
you
to have a plot, orthe story will fall apart. Trust me.
Please leave comments.... and be as BRUTAL as you can be... in
other
words, please critisize. I can only get better, if others tell me
what
I'm doing wrong...
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BUT agreeing with Denali, you're plot is unrecognizable. Plus, if at possible could you at least add a little action eh? Like make me say, "did ,so and so, just do that?" DO THAT and you'll get a fav. But for now I'll be watching you, *creepy stalker music plays* so keep up on those fics.