very good I like the overall structure and they where done very
tastefully but three tips one is that you kinda over did the whole
same (censored) theme with the second couple two the most trivial is that
Juniper trees dont grow in alaska and are native to the deserts of
the
south west us and are to small for anyone to stand on the stump and
three you used some slang in some of the sentences that werent
quotes
and slang that didnt exist in that time in some of the dialogue so
nice job and keep that in mind for the future because those are
very
professional.
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tastefully but three tips one is that you kinda over did the whole
same (censored) theme with the second couple two the most trivial is that
Juniper trees dont grow in alaska and are native to the deserts of the
south west us and are to small for anyone to stand on the stump and
three you used some slang in some of the sentences that werent quotes
and slang that didnt exist in that time in some of the dialogue so
nice job and keep that in mind for the future because those are very
professional.