Kay and the Peaceseakers (teaser)
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Kay and the Peaseseekers: Part I Kay and Leva
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Kay and the Peaseseekers: Part II Pivot
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Hey.
It's been a while since I've taken the time to write anything.
If you can't tell I have indeed gotten the slightest bit better, in grammer, sentence building and even in story line.
Well now I have started sort of a book, a series so to speak of a wolf named Kay in a war ridden planent where humans have been wiped out.
There will be 8+ series so be ready xD
= 8 | May 01, 2007 | ||
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That story is really good!!! It is sad though. It always gets me!! Well hurry up with the second one!! Read some of my fan fics some time!! |
| April 02, 2007 | ||
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| yer mum. |
This was an okay fic. It needs a lot of work though. You'd make char's talk, but not put quotes (") around it. That is needed. And you make things shoot by quickly, with not a lot of detail. You could work on that. If you like, look at my fics. Most of them are generally descriptive, yet fast paced too. It works. But dont let this get you down. Let it make you better. ;] Keep writing. |
i use that at school xD
that teaser is
sooooo awsome sweetie*hugs and kisses him* i lived it and
you!