I just love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*faves*

I have read a lot fan-fics and they have a character named
Angel, so Ithink that as long as the charcter has different
looks, personality, and history it could be the same. And it
was a good story.

The idea is pretty good here, but it's nearly impossible to
decipher what you're trying to say, because everything is
misspelled and jumbled without spaces. I think you have the
talent to be a pretty good writer here, but you need to have
a little more patience to proofread your stuff.

And I'm not trying to accuse you of anything, because
that's not really what I'm about, but I do find it
interesting that your story had Balto cheating on (or at
least, hanging out with) a new dame in town by the name of
Angel and, coincidently, a writer by the name of
Rotramel_the_Writer had a story that featured the same
situation, with the same character name Oh well, that's
for him and you to sort out I suppose.

Anyway,
hang in there and write some more.

every good unfinished story needs a sequel

write a sequal

Are you going to continue it?It was great!

Angel did it!
Nice! keep writing! I would though try to seperate the
dialogue better. But great job!

Thanks everyone!

I liked your story. By the way a friend of mine owns angel
to.