Hello there. So if you're wondering what the title means, I'll explain it...

YOU get to create Jade, my character's (here's her link: http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en/chars/Jade_J12/24260.html) first heartbreaker.

STORY LINE:

Jade had a boyfriend before she met Beck. But all he wanted to do was to see her hurt. He had abused her, both physically and verbally. He had RAPED her and got her pregnant with their first child, a son. But the boyfriend was so psychotic, he didn't believe that the pup was his. So he attacked the poor helpless pup right in front of Jade. Out of sheer hatred towards her "mate" and grief over the killing of her son, she murdered him in cold blood.

OK. RULES:

1. You CAN send in as many entries as you want.

2. The dog or wolf can NOT (I repeat, can NOT) be a sparkledog. No light green or neon orange colors or something like that. Your character HAS TO BE NATURAL COLORS! Like gray, black, white, etc.

3. You HAVE TO SEND IN YOUR ENTRIES BEFORE THE DEADLINE!!! Any members who have NOT sent in their entries before the deadline WILL BE DISQUALIFIED!!!

4. Most important rule: HAVE FUN!!! ^^

OK. BIO:

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Breed(s):

Crush:

Mate (please make sure you put Former Mate: Jade in this one):

Pups (you can choose the pup's name in this one):

History (make sure it's in, like... story form or something):

Extra:

And now... the moment you've all been waiting for... *automatic drumroll^

Puh-RIZES!!!

1st Place (3+ Entries) Wins:

The entry of my choice being Jade's first (and hopefully ONLY) heartbreaker

7 character design requests

10 image requests

2nd Place (2 Entries) Wins:

4 character design requests

7 image requests

1st Place (1 Entry) Wins:

2 character design requests

5 image requests

^^

That's basically all you need to know for this contest. Just one reminder: HAVE FUN!! ^^

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• by kinkykrayons (August 13, 2011)
• by makoza (July 24, 2011)
• by makoza (July 24, 2011)

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Kinkykra yons	August 13, 2011

Name: Maverik Age: 4 yrs Gender: male Breed(s): wolf Crush: none Former Mate: Jade Pups: Blaez History: Maverik was the first born of 3 boys, and was also the biggest. when he and his siblings grew up he fought with them a lot and ended up killing both when he was 1 yr old. His father was the alpha of the pack but maverik felt that he should be it at challenged his father. Being bigger and stronger then his father, he won and killed him too. Once he was alpha he raped many of the females in his pack. One day he left his pack with no warning. Maverik became a lone wolf and still flirted with females and beat them when he got angry. Then he met Jade, and he thought she would be different...but she ended up the same. he beat her no matter what she did and raped her, which resulted in a son. Maverik didn't believe it was his son though, and killed the poor pup right infront of Jade and then went after her. Although she was very cut up at the end, she managed to kill Maverik and move on, plocking her past. Extra: both of his parents were very kind wolves, and no one knows why he turned out so bad

Makoza	July 24, 2011

Riley: Yea, I know and I'm sorry. After Delano I have one other entry. Maybe more, I don't know

Makoza	July 24, 2011

My new entry is Delano: Name: Delano. Age: Five years. Gender: Male. Breed(s): Gray wolf. Crush: None. Former Mate: Jade. Pups: Devo. And meny others. History: Not much happened to Delano when he was a cub, other then that be was the most evil cub any of the pack had ever seen. When he grew he always flirted with the females, and always fought with the males. He hated being the one to be second on the females minds. He had raped meny a female, and had had meny pups with them, but that didn't stop him. When he met Jade be was in love, but it was mad love. He at first acted loving towards her and did anything she wanted from him, but then he turned and started to beat her, and always yelled at her for doing something he thought was wrong. In the end he raped her to, and the two of them had a pup. But being as he was thought she had cheated and killed the pup. He also turned on her, but she fought him off and killed for what he had done. Extra: None.

AvanJogi aLover14 3	July 24, 2011
	I <3 Riley Biers (Eclipse)

Wow!! Nice entry, Makoza!! ^^ Pretty long history, though, but it's OK. ^^

Makoza	July 24, 2011

(Part 3): "Uhh....." Was all that would come out of his mouth, he then ran from her and stopped by 'their' pond; the very pond the two met at. Jade came looking for him, and she found him she asked him why he did what he did, all he told her was that he didn't know. Jade forgave him, but told he to not do it again, he had nodded, but it happened again, and again, and again. The last time it had happened he had ended up rapping her, after that he disappeared for two weeks, when he finally came back he saw that she was pregnant and he started to regret leaving her. She forgave him one last time, she told him with a growl that if he ever done something like that to her again, he would never see her again. He told her he'd try, then he told her about the visions and she started to understand why he had attacked her, he also told her of what had happened to him as a cub. A few weeks later and their son was born. Dagger loved that cub more then anything, but soon the visions started acting up again; when it happened he saw his own cub as one of the ones who teased him as a pup. Not knowing who he was attacking again, and not knowing Jade had just returned from hunting, he attacked his son. Jade tryed to stop him, but blinded by his hate for the pack he was born in, he turned on her. This time she fought back, and in the end she killed the dog she had thought she loved and who she thought had loved her. Now Dagger has no hate, and he has no pain, but he still watches over his long lost love and her new family, with his son by his side.

Makoza	July 24, 2011

(part 2): Being scared of himself he ran, and ran, and ran, non stop for three days. When he finally did stop he was to tired to do anything and just fell to the ground. Thats where Jade found him, the young female was stocked to find a dog just laying unmoving so far out in the forest. She did her best to move him, having to rest at least eight times before finally geting him near a small water hole. She then splashed abit of it onto him, when he first woke, he almost attacked her thinking she was one of the alphas, after seeing she was not, he just got up and started walking away, but she stopped him. "Where do you think your going looking like that? Another animal will get you before the nights out." She said as she looked at him, he just shook his head and fell to the ground again, this time he made himself fall unlike last where he fell out of not eating or drinking anything for three days. "Fine." He said monotoned, and just laid his head on his paws. For the next few weeks, Jade helped him get back on his paws, over that time he grew to love her more then just as a friend, but as time passed things started happening to him; he started seeing things and nightmares started hunting his nights; almost every night he woke up screaming, but Jade was there to conforted him, at first at least. The two had been "mates" for at least a few weeks now. One day was different then the others when a vision would happen; this time he saw Jade as the alpha female, and out of hatred for the wolf he attacked her, when the vision ended, he saw that he was really attacking the female he loved dearly.

Makoza	July 24, 2011

History: Dagger was born into a small pack, however the pack's alphas soon realized he was part dog. They told his mother to get rid of him or they would do it for her. But holding to much love for her son her kept him hidden from the rest of the pack, soon when his eyes and ears had opened up Dagger wasn't sure about the world, but wanted to know more. So one day while his mother was sleeping he left the den. But as soon as he had made it to where the pack was. The alphas confronted him. "Who are you?" They asked. "I'm Sike." He said proudly showing no fear to the alphas at all. Soon however they realized who he was, "your Karie's cub aren't you?" The alpha female asked, Sike not knowing the furtue pain it would cause him, nodded. The next morning Sike was awoke to the sound of yelps, screams, and growls. He looked out side the den to see his mother literally being riped to shreds. After the beating was over and the alphas had left, he slowly moved toward his mother. "Mamma?" He asked when he got to her, "mamma? Come on, please get up. Please....." He cryed into his mother's blood stained fur. He after a few hours walked back into the den, "mom, I'll be in the den." He said more to himself, then his lifeless mother. He had no more tears to shed, he soon fell asleep, his mother's blood on his fur. He soon grew, but he never saw the pack after the attack on his mother until they to came for him, but by now he was a two year old. When the alphas tryed their attack on him, something in him snaped and he attacked them. The next thing he remembered is looking at his paws and his face in a small pond to find them covered in blood.

Makoza	July 24, 2011

Name: Dagger(Real name Sike(SE-this part is said like the se in snake)(Only Jade calls him it) Age: Four Years Gender: Male Breed(s): German Shepherd/Gray wolf mix. Crush: Jade. Former Mate: Jade. Pups: Jakin.(JA-Kin) Extra: Not much other then his father had been a one time thing with his mother, his father was also a Pure bred German Shepherd, where his mother was a Pure bred Gray wolf. Also I'll have to post history into another or two other comments. I hate long the comments now >

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