

NAME:Jedadiah
NICKNAMES:Jedi,JJ
SPEICIES:Dog
BREED:Doberman Pinscher
FATHER:Blacky
MOTHER:Jaimie
SIBLINGS:Anais
FRIENDS:,open
BEST FRIEND:baby(OFWGKEA)
EX-FRIEND:Jenna
CRUSHES:Geode,Baby,Jamia
CRUSHERS:Geode,Baby,Jamia(Maltathecub),Yoshi(Ezi),open
MATE:GEODE
BREED HE IS ATRRACTED TO:Huskies
LIKES:Being with Jenna,flirting,girls,being evil,when Jenna is mad at balto.
DISLIKES:When balto is around,being disturbed while sleeping,Annoying pups,when Jenna and balto are snuggling,when he is being told what to do, when a dog tries to dominate him.
PERSONALITY:Jedi is a evil dog but HUGE flirt especially with huskies he finds attractive but when it comes to Geode and his family he will give his own life to protect the ones he loves but destroy his enemies he is not one to push around ever.
ENEMIES:Balto,Steel,open
HISTORY:Jedi was born in a littler of 11 pups!! He was born the meanest pup out of all of them. He was known to make his siblings cry when they would play. One day Jedi started seeing his brothers and sisters vanish with strangers except his sister Anais. One day both pups were dropped of in the streets alone to fend for themselves Jedi obviously protected his sister from anything bad and as they got older they decided to off on their own and soon Anais was took in by a loving family but, Jedi kept searching for a new place to call home. A couple of days later Jedi was dieing of hunger and pasted out when he woke up he saw a female red husky looking at him and licking him. Jedi quickly got up and blushed a little the redhead introduced herself as Jenna and soon those two became best of friends . But soon Jedi began to have feelings for his best friend. Soon he would flirt with her and blush every time they hung out but Jenna never took it literal. One day as Jedi was heading to go hang out with her he saw her walking up to him with some random wolf-dog and introduced him to Jedi his name was Balto . Jedi had growed at the dog for dominance and Balto became submissive to the big Doberman. Balto knew that this was not the type of dog you wanna be in a fight with so he always tried to make peace with Jedi but, Jedi still hated him because he would show her affection. One day he saw a black and white husky flirting with Jenna and Jedi jumps in to defend her an fights the dog and Jedi left the dog with many wounds. Jenna thanked her friend and told him that his name was Steel and that he always bothered her and was thankful for his rescue. Soon she had told him that she had feelings for Balto and was heartbroken and furious and he decided to fight Balto to the death and for Jenna's heart when they were gonna fight Jenna stopped them and choose to live her life with Balto. And asked him to stay out of her life. Jenna never saw Jedi after that until one day he crashed into her and Jenna was very happy to see her old friend and introduced him to her kids but Jedi refused to talk to the girl he once called his best friend and told her " I thought you said you wanted me out of your life." With an angry face and she responded "I thought you were my friend." And began to tear up but he responded " friend? What kind of friend betreays you for your enemy and tells them to stay out of their life?" "Huh? You tell me cause trust me we are NOT friends and never will be!!" And left and searches for a mate and wants to make a pack. He later met a husky named Geode when he defended her from a pack of dogs and ended up falling for her and she felt the same way and they became mate and later Jedi encountered many girls and even met his best friend Baby a black and white husky and had a crush on her and also met two new friends Jamia and Yoshi he developed a crush on Jamia also but stayed friends.
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Dragon tamer:I totally get where your coming from but my characters
have always been that way and they are totally fine with it. Thanks
for the props tho^^ also when I mean I'm going to be picky I mean I
going to look more further than just looks. - wildfire -: thank you soo much means a lot and glad that u agree on my way of writing my characters^^ |
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I can totally understand you beig picky about the mate part. And as
for the story, that "wall of text" is how I wrote every single
character of mines history and they've always seem to have been fine
by everyone. Nice character, Striderlover! |
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I'm a little confused by it saying, "MATE pen(will be picky may be
any breed)." Isn't that a contradiction?Also, you should use more than one paragraph when detailing a story; just putting a wall of text up there makes it more difficult to read. I'll give you props for using a Doberman, though; I don't recall ever seeing that breed used on this source. |