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Maito(LL)


Maito(LL)

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Created by : LionLover22

Main type : Fan character

Realistic? : Realistic

Used in a fan creation? : Used in a fan creation

Permission to use : Protected

Gender : Male

Character details : Many details

Main color : Brown

Animal/Human type : ---------



Description

Detail Maito(LL)

"The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time"

Maito | HuskyxWolf | Sled dog

B A S I C S

Age: 2

Body Build: Shows more Jenna but is noticably balto's son

Home/s: Home for sled dogs (Current)

Theme song: Give me love (c) Ed sheeran

Voice actor: Liam hemsworth

R E L A T I O N S H I P S

Parents: Balto and Jenna

Siblings: Elijah, Annabelle, Natilie....

Love interest: Rita (Mate)

Pups: None yet

Other family: None

T R A I T S

Likes: Being a sled dog, play fighting, making friends, teaching, learning, rolling in the snow, doing a good job, making Jamie proud.

Dislikes: Steele, being roused, doing something wrong, being ignored, losing a race, seeing Jamie sad.

Personality:
Maito is a very head strong and boistrous wolfdog, he takes pride in everything he does and wont stand to see his loved ones being hurt or saddened. He is a real hero and very popular amongst the other sled dogs, male and female. Maito is loyal but does have a goofy, easy-going side which he only shows around his mate and some of his close friends. He has a short temper though which can easily be triggered by many things, which is one reason he loses friends. Maito is usually laid-back and un-shallow but can be two-faced when with his real friends, or the jocks.

History:
Maito was born from Balto and Jenna, he was an adventurous and annoying pup, always yearning for attention. If he didnt get it, he would fight, bit, kick, scratch and bark until he got it. He was extremely close with one particular brother, Elijah. Elijah and Maito were two peas in a pod and never apart. Maito soon found that Elijah was picked on by most other pups so he decided to step in, he was a rather big pup for his age and managed to scare off all the other pups that were harassing Elijah. When Maito was 4 months old, it was time to be adopted out. Most of his siblings had been adopted out and it was now Maito's turn to find a home. A handsome young man by the name, jamie was planning to adopt maito who in his eyes, was full of potential. But a greasy, obiece man beat jamie to it. This mans name was Joe and he seemed nice enough so Maito politely went with him.

A few weeks had past and Maito was starting to have trouble fitting in, Joe had three other dogs who were fit and strong, and frankly, didnt like Maito one bit. They picked on Maito for hours on end and it only got worse when Joe began to beat Maito for what maito thought was no reason at all. But Maito had to put up with it as he had no way of escaping and no where else to go. The only way Maito could get out and about was when he was sled racing, of course he would only race the smalle, dodgy teams as his owner didnt have enough money to pay for greater competitors. Maito was lead dog and sowed true leadership in his racing. When he was 2 years old, he went up against a team that was still bad, but the best team he had gone against. During the race the leader of the opposite team forcefully made Maito's team crash. They were only a few minutes out of Nome so when they crashed, and Maitos buckle came loose from the main rope, he saw it as a chance to flee from Joe. Without looking back, he headed straight for the home for sled dogs, Jamies home.

Jamie was overjoyed to see Maito, and knew that Joe was a cruel man, as he had seen Joe beating his dogs once before. Jamie emmidiatly brought Maito inside, and tended to his twisted ankle. He was welcomed with open arms by all the other dogs there which made Maito completely forget about Joe and the other cruel dogs at his old home. Maito also still has a chance to get let out of the home to free roam around the village, and to see his best friend and brother, Elijah.

One day, maito was out exploring when he ran into a sand coloured female. She was beautiful and Maito was stuck aweing at her appearance that he didnt even hear her introduce herself. Maito found out her name was Rita, and she was one of the most beautiful girls he had ever seen. The two emmidiatly took to eachother and soon enough, Maito developed feelings for her. He couldn't help but smile when he was arounf her but then sadden when he thought that he would never get a chance to tell her how he felt. All until that one faithful night, the whole village was scurrying around to try and make it to the big race of Maitos team and one of the greatest teams Nome had ever Known. When maito was saying fairwell to Rita, he accidentally slipped out that he liked her. he turned bright red when he saw how shocked she was. But she soon relaxed her face muscles and told him that she liked him back. From then on the two were considered 'mates pending', always together and always in love.

C R E D I T S

Head render: Me

Body render: Me

BG: Princess and the frog

 

 

 

 



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December 12, 2012
Latvia Female
Wow! The designe is, very nice. :icon299: You done, an amazing job looking at the bio and char designe.

December 12, 2012
Usa Male
O' Cap'n My Cap'n!
I substantially agree with Natti and Mighty here. Natti's points are well-stated and, like she and Mighty, I do think that, overall, this is a great character! And that it's nice to see Balto-related material in a bio for a change!

December 12, 2012
Usa Female
Path of the Demon
:icon299: Great work! It's good to some original design work! Along with a Balto related bio.

December 09, 2012
Australia
thankyou ^^

December 09, 2012
Pretty!

December 08, 2012
Australia
Nattikay: Very deep point there haha, thankyou for all the advice. I did think that i had too much information in there but im so used to making SS bio's which are long like this, that i obviously didn't realise how over board i was going with the sub-sections. XD. I appreciate your very well thought out critique though, it helps me a great deal with how to develop my characters more. I will update his bio and make it as short as possible, but im still going to add the family he has, as maybe his mother and father might be deceased but still have a big part in who he is (Just an example). I was thinking of making his "adult" History section aswell but thought that he was too young and i was going to wait until i had aged him for his adult section to be fullfilled. But i will definetly take your thoughts into account and change him to be appropriate for the site. And for people's enjoyment :) Thankyou very much for the comment/s xD

December 08, 2012
Usa Female
Water Tribe
[continued from previous post]

The history is interesting enough, but it could use more development; not necessarily more events, but rather expounding on what you already have. Really dig into his personality here--how did the events make him feel? How did he adapt to the changes in his life? Perhaps explain a little more about this seemingly-nice-but-actually-cruel owner--why was he like that? Did he mean to be cruel? Why did he fake being nice? How did it effect Maito? etc.

And of course, add the "adult" section. Personally, I think you should have had that ready before posting the character---it IS actually an official rule for the character to be as complete as possible before being submitted. Can't quite say that I was too impressed to see that you wanted to wait for him to "find a mate" before making his adult section because, you know, not EVERY character needs one. It's very much possible to have a character who doesn't. But whatever. XD


Overall, though, a VERY nice start on this character, LionLover! Keep it up! ;)

December 08, 2012
Usa Female
Water Tribe
His design is gorgeous and fits in VERY well with the Balto universe--excellent work on that!

As for his bio...the biggest issue I see is that a good deal is composed of extraneous information that doesn't necessarily need to be known. The relationships section I would consider getting rid of; relations can be mentioned in the history instead of taking up a bunch of space earlier in the bio--plus, that way we get to really learn more about the two characters' real RELATIONSHIP--how they interact and came to know each other and whatnot--rather than just seeing them listed as friends or siblings or mate or whatever else.

I also think the "appearance" section is a tad extraneous, seeing as we have a picture of him on the same page. I really appreciate that you took the time to mention his build, though. Few people really bother with that, so kudos!


As for the actual meat of the bio...the personality looks off to a good start. I'd simply suggest fleshing it out a tad more.

[continued next post...sorry this wound up so long. XDX]

December 08, 2012
Australia
R5rocks: Thankyou for stating that, ill add them :)
Devious: Im happy you like him ^_^
Marasol: Sure! Pm me her when your done :)

December 08, 2012
Usa
He is so cute!!! Can I make a mate for him?

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